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Poems
« Thread Started on Mar 5, 2007, 3:50pm »

Hey everyone! lol I wrote some poems and i want to know what people think of them. Be honest. If you realllly hate them say so. I-i think i c-can cope with that. lol ok here they are.

Magpie Syndrome

Magpie cries for shining moon
Magpie wants the blazing sun
Magpie needs the sparkle sparkle
Magpie needs the glitter shine

Blackbird black
Blackbird dark
Blackbird with
Shattered glass heart

Magpie keens for lustrous silver
Magpie aches for beaten gold
Magpie needs the sparkle sparkle
Magpie needs the glitter shine

Blackbird cries
Blackbird dies
Blackbird with
Shattered glass heart

Magpie screams for shattered glass
Magpie rips the blackbird's breast
Magpie gets the sparkle sparkle
Magpie gets the glitter shine

Blackbird dead
Blackbird cold
Magpie with
shattered glass heart

Hate

Red is the color of fire that
burns in eye, throat and thought when
reason's mighty fortress bows and crumbles to
enemies of loath and
a hunters patience when
he waits with gun and burning words that
choke and bind the being who has walked
paths of shadow that fell creatures rule.
They urged me on so
I must stalk with a madman's intensity 'till
fire burns upon my prey that
cowars in the presence of all consuming, loathing, red...

Death

And grateful was I to walk
upon a field of silence
Black is mourned but blue I saw on my grand finale
And a river cries with laughter
And every drop is a tear
every footprint fades away
silence is choking and soothing
and friends and foes become distant pain

Every babes eye is blue
Every river in this land
was mine to hold and slip away
upon the bank of silver stone
tears and laughter are bitter cold
I slipped into the river
and quickly it bore me away
Grief i leave behind but peace is mine to hold.

Ok so tell me what you think. Don't be shy. Guests included.

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Re: Poems
« Reply #1 on Apr 7, 2007, 12:00am »

Wow, these are some really good ones, better than some of my poems.

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Re: Poems
« Reply #2 on Apr 7, 2007, 10:01am »

Thanks. What are some of your poems?

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Re: Poems
« Reply #3 on Apr 7, 2007, 11:39am »

Tecnically I only have 2, I only remember one and it's actually a song.

" Don't cry my baby, don't cry my sweet
Tomorrow we will go out and see.
Nobody hates nor are they discreet
Everyone loves you my precious baby. "

I know, tacky,

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